Hey guys, here's my new song "Eye for an Eye." I've been going through it lately and needed to unload. It would mean a lot to hear your opinion on it. I changed my name to I'mARKA, haven't been feeling "lonaboi anymore.
Not sure whether you want critique on the beat or the vocals so I'll do both.
I really like the beat, the chord progression works well and although it's fairly straightforward, it doesn't get boring or anything. The mix is nice as well so good job on that (if you produced it!)
I think your vocals are fine - the writing is solid enough and your delivery sounds pretty good but the processing effects and autotune do make them sound a bit generic to be honest. I would maybe tone the effects down or work on other areas of your vocals to make them a bit more unique. It's a good track though, keep doing your thing man.
Good job man! Both good lyrics and vocals. Mixing is clear and melody is nice. Only thing I will say is the snare is a bit harsh. Maybe just high in the mix? Otherwise really nice keep going!
If you would like please have a listen to my track: A mellow beat
