Hi-hat part is really dope and I really liked how it varies throughout the track. The mix sounds to me very clean and each part of arrangement generally has its distinct place, so it is quite pleasant to listen. Regards things I noticed that could be done in another way: 808 - I would choose some more transientish sound, I think it sounds like either it is clashing with some other instruments or the decay part could be louder. On the other hand I checked it on cheap output and it is really well audible. The clap is in my opinion too dry, I would think here about giving it some reverb or layering with another sound to make it stronger/more spacey.
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This shit hard..I like what the hats and the 808 got going on back forth. Then the mix on this make it even harder. I lowkey be on youtube listening to instrumentals so I can mix like this lol