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[lowclassvillain]

man ive been producing for almost a month now and i need your ears and i want some advice foreals
https://soundcloud.com/abcdef125
if i have a rap up or something... im not a rapper, but its sure as hell fun as **** when you get all shwasty hahaha
WHAT DO I NEED TO IMPROVE ON!

 

[wildinout8]

Def a fun track and you have a solid flow over top of it. I'm following you on SC now and left a comment on the track! I'd just like to hear some variation in the beat to keep it fresh throughout.

Check me out at: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...outh-etc/apollo-archangels-track-f4fa-480816/

 

[lowclassvillain]

cool, that's what my friends keep telling me that the beats are tight but they just loop too long with nothing else really there to catch the listener, defintley need to work on that. thanks for the feedback appreciate it

 

[Punchandpie]

Your flow sounds good and natural, keep working hard and practicing

 

[lowclassvillain]

but the production is what i need critique on, the rap we were just chillin, check out the other beats i produce all my stuff.