I like the simple melody. It is catchy, but still leaves tons of room and freedom for a rapper. Also helps create a nice simple/clean mix. Maybe don't need the 808 that loud, could turn that down just slightly. Dig the drums and groove though. Solid stuff.
i think you need more bass in the 808s and perhaps the synths should be slightly behind the beat more but it's a nice beat. wish the melody varied a bit more, just to keep things interesting. Fear [F4F]
feedback on this please
the melody sounds great, as august said, its catchy but i can deff spit some lyrics on it, but the 808 isn't really going well. Maybe if it had some slides on it, would have sounded much better if it is the main part keep it up