Hi, in your beat what I would do in another way is to choose other sounds, the two you used for Piano/Synth and Guitar sound to me like most default available. I would suggest just sweeping through different VST's (Kontakt libraries), samples (Splice) or using some processing can make a huge difference. The same refers to drums especially the clap and the perc in the beginning.
I would appreciate if you could check my tracks (see signature) as well as help me in my experiment I am trying to conduct, details below:
