Sounds - the stab and the guitar(?) are in my opinion too raw (I would consider using better plugins or processing them better). I would also focus on drums, so that they would hit heavier. Nevertheless,the arrangement of drums is really cool - I liked the diversity, dynamics and panning, you have good skills here. The patterns as whole are however too repeatable for me, so I would add some more distinctions to them (maybe some FX meant as audios not as effects on mixer).
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