PartyNextDoor & The Weeknd Type Beat FEEDBACK 4 FEEDBACK

[GuessBeatz]

What's good everyone,

I've been trying to switch up my sound and try different things. The darker Toronto type of sound has been inspiring to me as of late and I'm hoping I got the vibe down right so let me know. As always leave me your tracks and I'll return the favor as soon as I am able to

 

[Donta Black]

Nice big bro, feel the pad is sort of thick on the low end, also I wasn't a big fan of the Bell that followed the strings, I felt it without. This has good potential. Check me out: The World Strongest || DBZ Instrumental- @dontablack330 ((F4F))

 

[AlexPerkins]

So atmospheric! Haha, the vocal sampling is great.

My suggestion would be to add more than just a pad. maybe some fun, quick legato, harmonic melodies here and there. The bell could have been more on pitch/within the chord. Right now you have a weird Minor 6th interval between the longer synth melody/soprano of the pads and the bells. You could use a Major 3rd interval to have more harmonic consistency. Even then it may not be harmonically consistent depending on your chord voicing in the pad. If the melody was the root of you pad chords, the bells could be on these pitches. Sorry for the convoluted feedback haha.

It would look like this:
Bells : D . C . C . B . G .
Melody : B . A . A . G . E .