Youtube started it from 0:46 point, that's weird, I had to start it again from beginning(maybe you should check your link IDK).
Now about the track itself. I'm not sure but the beat from the start promises super hardcore sound, I think it is because of drums, maybe only hats, they give some aggressive bounce of some sort and without heavy bass and pounding kick I feel tricked in unfunny way. Reconsider at least the hat line, maybe drums altogether. I would suggst some modern samples to go with Drake's "Started from the bottom" feel that your beat gives me.
Pianos are too weak and plain in my opinion. They need more accentuation at least in some parts of song. Like play with velocity and/or transient shaping. Maybe add somewhere in 400-600 for piano, cause it lacks body.
I personally would add some suttle additional high piano parts, just subtle barely audible pieces. You have something like that but it took me like 5 times to hear them. Some bridge with pads would be nice too. You can try cut out filter automation for drums to make the beat less repetitive.
Beat is nice and gives me Silent Hill vibes. But to make those vibes stronger you need to work with your drums more, they are not fitting I think. They are like mean muggin' and aggressive yet the overall atmosphere of beat is gloomy and vague, coated with thick layer of myst, maybe some less bright drums would do, just some low-pass filter may work in this case.
Best regards.
