why did you post this in a hip hop forum, this is like some drum and bass or old school house break music it sounds like trash to my ears, nothing I could hear anyone spit over.
Maybe buy some drum kits and work on making a beat with only 1 instrument or sample to begin with and then gradually add more to help with the overall broadness of sound not just grab any junk you think might be good at throw it all together like I would this track the bin if it was a psychical copy
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Chill beat - Daughter Youth Sample [F4F][/h]