The mix quality is good, everything has its place and is good audible, I think the drums are the best part and sound professional, guitar in the background as well. I feel that vocal is not coherent with the beat and I would advise here to focus on this part. I assume it could be recorded with better acoustic treatment, but I have no experience in this field to be sure regards this advice. Nevertheless, congratulations for really good work!
I would appreciate if you could check my tracks and let me know what your thoughts are, if you'd like to check - please find them in my signature.
