New style, what do you Think?

[Sam Klitsner]

Trying out something different, let me know what you think. F4F of course.

https://soundcloud.com/thugsonklitsner/alcibiades

 

[KVLTVRED]

At 45 sec I started vibing hard. Great job. With some development and substance this could be a serious banger. Keep it up. What daw are you using?

Check out my first sampled beat.

https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/production-techniques/showcase-your-music-give-receive-feedback/rap-chill-rap-boom-bap-trap-dirty-south-etc/first-sampled-beat-porn-hop-critique-481085/

 

[Sam Klitsner]

Thanks, what do you think I should focus on for further developing it? I'm all Ableton.

Your track is nice, compositionally it feels very complete.
I feel like the kick could sit in a better spot in the mix.
nice 'live' feel with all the sampled instruments

 

[Zerker00]

Nice beat, that kick goes in lowkey But this is somewhat experimental to me though.
Check out my work: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ef-type-beat-snippet-f4f-prd-zerker00-482633/

 

[KVLTVRED]

Thanks, what do you think I should focus on for further developing it? I'm all Ableton.

Your track is nice, compositionally it feels very complete.
I feel like the kick could sit in a better spot in the mix.
nice 'live' feel with all the sampled instruments

The kick is something I fought with for days. It's the one biggest quarrel that I have yet to find myself begging to tend to at the moment.

As far as development, maybe I may have worded that wrong. I feel personally the beginning segment is.. For lack of better words; disorganized. (no offense; again just my opinion.) I don't really feel myself getting heavily into it until the 45 second marker. All in all good track. Great choice of elements.