The high-pitched sample feels like some vintage Kanye ish bruh.
I think the sample chops need work, each chop sounds like it one beat and they were all played one after the other to make the melody. Try chopping the sample into 1 or 2 bar increments. I can also hear popping when each chop plays(if you use Edison in FL, you can avoid that by using "declick out").
Kick sound a little boxy too and doesn't fit well in the context of the song.