Nature Boi (original beat) F4F

[jvsmine]

Just made my first beat tape "One Eleven" and here's the third track off the tape. Let me know what you think, I'll return the feedback. Thanks for listening.


Listen to the full tape here:
https://soundcloud.com/jvsminebeats/sets/one-eleven-vol-1

 

[Bund&Grund]

nice! like the vibe!! you have some dope variations! my critique would be the panning on your keys, its a bit too much. but cool work!

this is us, let us know what you think
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...h-etc/bund-grund-kev-instrumental-f4f-535587/

 

[Rogey]

This is a really clean beat dude, the only critic I have is to lower the volume of the hats a little bit, they almost seem louder than that snare.. Love the chants...

Check me out --> https://www.futureproducers.com/for...dirty-south-etc/never-coming-down-f4f-535531/

 

[Outss]

make the kick more bassy.. the use of samples is nice.. maybe add a bit of distortion to the main sound just to make it sound a bit mmore interessting.. its spitable though.. probs gd for a rapper as its quite minimal.. keep it up! Rtf? Peaace https://www.futureproducers.com/for...irty-south-etc/success-outss-ft-tells-535287/

 

[jvsmine]

nice! like the vibe!! you have some dope variations! my critique would be the panning on your keys, its a bit too much. but cool work!

this is us, let us know what you think
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...h-etc/bund-grund-kev-instrumental-f4f-535587/

Thanks for checking it out! Appreciate the feedback too, was having a bit too much fun with the panning lol. Checking out your track now

 

[jvsmine]

This is a really clean beat dude, the only critic I have is to lower the volume of the hats a little bit, they almost seem louder than that snare.. Love the chants...

Check me out --> https://www.futureproducers.com/for...dirty-south-etc/never-coming-down-f4f-535531/

Thanks for listening, glad you liked it. And thanks for pointing out the volume with the hats, I'll definitely keep that in mind when mixing. Checking out your beat now

 

[SwagProductionz]

i dont think the drums made sense with this beat.. id switch the drums and work on making drums fit with the sounds more.. but anyway checkout this track i produced https://www.futureproducers.com/for...e-drop-links-feed-4-feed-535593/#post50048108

 

[jvsmine]

make the kick more bassy.. the use of samples is nice.. maybe add a bit of distortion to the main sound just to make it sound a bit mmore interessting.. its spitable though.. probs gd for a rapper as its quite minimal.. keep it up! Rtf? Peaace https://www.futureproducers.com/for...irty-south-etc/success-outss-ft-tells-535287/

Thanks for the feedback and appreciate you checking it out. Definitely will keep that in mind next time around, thanks again. Checking your track out now

 

[jvsmine]

i dont think the drums made sense with this beat.. id switch the drums and work on making drums fit with the sounds more.. but anyway checkout this track i produced https://www.futureproducers.com/for...e-drop-links-feed-4-feed-535593/#post50048108

Thanks for checking it out, appreciate the feedback. Just commented on your track