mist type beat (F4F)

[Yinte]

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[MarcoBoomin]

I think it needs better sound selection brother keep working

 

[ihuntbears]

I like how it's melancholy. I've always had a weak spot for that particular riff so it's cool to hear it with 808s behind it. Mixwise I would turn the 808s louder and the riff down, maybe use master fx to glue it all together. Other than that each individual element is clean. Keep it up. Here's mine - BACK again REPLYING to ALL FEEDBACKS: T.D.E. / Isaiah Rashad style beat

 

[bjoven]

would be better bro if you added some variations in your hi hat. but other than that. its all good. keep it up bro

 

[LongLiveTheKing]

I think the melody was nice and overall a nice track but needs a lot of
work. I think variation needs to be your best friend. all elements could use some variation. Aka change ups to keep the listener interested. And I agree your sound selection needs some help. Save up buy some quality sounds. And your drums need rearranging and another mix to bring some spark bring this track to life! Keep grinding!


Heres my thread for feedback thanks!

 

[Yinte]

thanks for the advice. However, in regards to the drum arrangements. Thats what most mist songs sound like, Listen to karlas back, ain't the same, display skills and many more.