Looking for Constructive Criticism on My Trap/Rap Metal instrumental

Hi. I'm a producer and do mainly Rap Hip Hop instrumentals with a psychedelic touch, but some time ago I met this superb guitarist.
We are trying to merge together heavy metal, alternative Rock from his side, and Rap, Trap, and Hip Hop style from My side.

We made a couple of tracks. I will post our latest. I would appreciate it if someone can give his opinion on what to improve.

 
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