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[jmsfj]

My names John, I'm 15 years old and I use FL Studio to produce Rap and sometimes EDM.

Check out my soundcloud:
https://soundcloud.com/john-fiorenza

In return, post your music below and ill give it a listen.

 

[fantazma]

Pros:
You have a solid bass line
You switch up the beat at 2:52, that part of the track sounds better. In my opinion I would use that for the entire song and just get rid of what came before.

Cons:
I would replace the "hey" tag with something different, maybe something that represents your producing name, 56.
I would tweak the synth at 0:14 to make it sit better in the mix.


check out my stuff and tell me what you think
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ggae-reggaeton-dancehall/new-here-f4f-531180/

 

[jmsfj]

I appreciate the feedback!
you are right about the cons, the synth was ok but it could have been tweaked to help it sit better
and the tag situation; I need to make one lol i just used navis voice because I love the legend of zelda haha
but thanks i checked your song out too i liked it