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    My names John, I'm 15 years old and I use FL Studio to produce Rap and sometimes EDM.

    Check out my soundcloud:
    https://soundcloud.com/john-fiorenza

    In return, post your music below and ill give it a listen.

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    Pros:
    You have a solid bass line
    You switch up the beat at 2:52, that part of the track sounds better. In my opinion I would use that for the entire song and just get rid of what came before.

    Cons:
    I would replace the "hey" tag with something different, maybe something that represents your producing name, 56.
    I would tweak the synth at 0:14 to make it sit better in the mix.


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    I appreciate the feedback!
    you are right about the cons, the synth was ok but it could have been tweaked to help it sit better
    and the tag situation; I need to make one lol i just used navis voice because I love the legend of zelda haha
    but thanks i checked your song out too i liked it

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