Just finished my 2nd Instrumental! Thoughts!?

it's not the kind of stuff I would normally listen to but objectively speaking its good. I think it would be better with a synth pad. consider that next time -- i think that would bring it to the next level. it isn't perfect, but I like it.

my thread - i can't post links yet, so you'll have to copy it into your URL box: futureproducers.com/forums/production-techniques/showcase-your-music-give-and-receive-feedback-/rap-chill-rap-boom-bap-trap-dirty-south-etc/feedback-feedback-instrumental-beat-feedback-498894/#post49899548
 
When you have the Main Saw lead going. have a low pad sound play throuugh out it. add a little bit of a boomy 808 when that saw lead ain't playing to give it some low end. It sounds kinda like good skeleton. just needs some finishing out.
 
KelevraOne said:
When you have the Main Saw lead going. have a low pad sound play throuugh out it. add a little bit of a boomy 808 when that saw lead ain't playing to give it some low end. It sounds kinda like good skeleton. just needs some finishing out.
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Yea I feel you on all of this. I always think my ish is too bare, trying to learn to make the instrumentals sound more full/layered!
 
It could use a bit more energy, and some differentiation in the drums pattern, and maybe another melody or something to help it build to the chorus... Iono I'm a rookie myself so I can't say too too much, for a second beat though it's good a lot of people stuff sounds like a cluttered mess at that point, but this was clean and had a structure
 
strange_infinite said:
It could use a bit more energy, and some differentiation in the drums pattern, and maybe another melody or something to help it build to the chorus... Iono I'm a rookie myself so I can't say too too much, for a second beat though it's good a lot of people stuff sounds like a cluttered mess at that point, but this was clean and had a structure
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Thanks for the input man. Follow me on soundcloud to see if I listen to everybody and get better ;)
 
This is pretty good for your second instrumental! I would add another synth or something to fill up the beat more and some more bass but other than that nice selection of sounds. Keep it up!

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varias93 said:
This is pretty good for your second instrumental! I would add another synth or something to fill up the beat more and some more bass but other than that nice selection of sounds. Keep it up!

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TBH man. I got bored really quick. Then it seemed like the song didn't change at all throughout the whole thing. Maybe just mix it up a bit more. How long you been producing?
 
Jonny Dibs said:
TBH man. I got bored really quick. Then it seemed like the song didn't change at all throughout the whole thing. Maybe just mix it up a bit more. How long you been producing?
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Thanks for the feed back man. I can see where your coming from. Needs some variation. I've been producing awhile now but I've been on and off just starting to get back into again. What about you?
 
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