Japanese Style Trap Beat - Sorrow

[-iNK-]

Good evening!

Just finished a one day project. Sorrow, a sad japanese style trap beat.

What do you think of it?

Thank you!


soundcloud.com/ink-gtx/sorrow
YouTube

 

[Prince Danny the One]

You killed the melody and those strings are high quality. sound-wise this is pretty good...I don't like the snare you used, it sounds too boxy and cheap, I'd switch it out for a another one.

Also I think this beat could use some other percussive elements like an open hi-hat and some chants too drive the idea that it's a trap beat. Besides that I think that you did great job for banging this out in one day. Keep it up!

Can you leave me some feedback: Soulful boombap beat.

 

[HailCaesar]

I agree with Prince Danny the sound selection and melodies are nice but the snare is a lil too boxy a sharper snare would better suit this beat also I don't know if its me but it sounds like theres a filter over the whole beat.

Check out my latest.
[F4F] Playboi Carti x Pierre Bourne (Bouncy/Melodic) Type Beat [F4F]

 

[-iNK-]

Thank you very much. These are Sakura presets which i love more then anything! I get comments about the snare on previous tracks too. Its just something i like in a snare, got to try and get a broader liking to snares.

Ill see if i remix this with some more percs

 

[viktorbarrio9]

nice melody