Really nice idea!
I feel like the snare could have a bigger dynamic range. Maybe try and play with it's velocity a bit to give it a more human feel.
Kick could be a bit punchier but that could be just me.
You gotta make it more interesting man! Add some elements that progress the track forward, let them come on and go. Get some percussion going, get an organ in there, make some arp, get some vocal chops.
That's a solid idea, you just gotta give it a bit more