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    hot trap instrumental (f4f)

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    brand new, made it for my boy to record over but would like some feedback i will return it
    https://soundcloud.com/mpokey20/trap-instrumental-5
    Last edited by mpokey20; 07-01-2013 at 04:01 PM.
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    I'd probably add some sort of variety to the melody and progression to the song. Keep it going!

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    Word this shit goes in man. I like the synth it sounds sick but you prolly need some variation to this, either a pitch down or adding another instrument or something, something so its not just the same loop over and over. but other than that its sick as hell, ur drums are very nice and complex. check out my beats here https://soundcloud.com/team-machine

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    cool beat. id get rid of that annoying overused transitional slide in the beginning. the windy one later on is good though. the arrangement is good and your instrument selection is good too. try raising the octave on the melody on the second half of the chorus/verse to give it variance. overall good job.

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    - Turn up the kick and the snare more
    - Turn down the main melody a bit
    - Arrangement is good
    - Instrumentation is cool
    - I felt the snares had too much reverb

    Work on the mix!

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    thanx guys getting back on your beats now
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    I'd get rid of that cheesey "HEY" sample, rack slide sample, and the Drumma Boy transition effect... at least gate it if you're going to use it that way people won't mistake you for another producer. I liked some aspects of the beat... I just think it got incredibly boring really fast for me... it's basically 2 loops over and over. Also try to either EQ some punch into that kick or maybe layer it with another punchier kick... it kind of gets lost in the mix for me. Keep at it man, you'll get there bro!
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    I would recommand chaging dat kick for a crispier one

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