I fiddled with the beat a bit but i didn't make it. I'm used to produce but i wanted to focus on rappingYo G, that track is dope as hell. I'm confused though, you produce or rap or both?
thank you so much man!!!Real cool and smooth, chill vibe. Flow nice too music clean bro.
I really like it! It seems like you are really comfortable on the mic, really good vibes. maybe at 1:25 come in with a hook so that you can keep it in my head as well as keeping it fresh. I also think that your vocals woiuld improve with a nice reverb to really sit them in the beat. really nice job though, will follow!
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Hey thank you man!! i wanted to lay it down really smooth and calm and just have a little intensity come through because it's kinda dream like but i def feel you man and i appreciate you leaving some feedDope beat man. I love the way the strings flow with the drums. Really tight rhythm. Also, the samples sound good. Im not sure how I feel about the vocal tone but this being a remix you probably didn't have much control over that anyway. Definitely a sick track though.
Thank you for checking it out man I appreciate you!Great listen, like the oldschool boombap vibe this encompasses. I feel the bassline could be tougher but that's just personal preference. Keep grinding buddy
No hate at all brother I take every piece of crit I get and use it to get better! I really appreciate youIts dope man, I'm diggin it. Tho again, I feel the vocal performance could be enhanced. When I listen to music, I view it as a show and visuals go through my mind whether its the instruments that are playing or its someone singing, it puts me in an environment. So not only do the sounds need to have life to them and feel, so do the vocals. (Again I'm not trying to be to critical, I'm only trying to give solid advice.) So when you are on the track you need to actually make me feel like you are some cool ass dude walking through the park rapping on this hot ass beat, you feel me? You have to control your image and make it so I can visual how cool you are, making me more susceptible to saying "dang those are some dope lyrics!", because they are. But it's the difference between, are you rapping or are you preaching, ya know. You gotta make it like its just flowing off the top and your cool with it. Put me in a place where I can not only hear you but also see you. Hate this or take this, I just want to see you get better.