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[Johnnie Cleveland]

produced and wrote this a while back, what do you think? This is a very old song and i am aware of the many errors in the mix and vocals. I was thinking about redoing it now that i am way more skilled. Is it worth it?

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[Mycelial_Cords]

It has potential but production says that's an old track. You probably hear what's wrong with it - overcompressed, too much reverb on vocals. Flow could be tighter and syllables are off. I can definitely say that you progressed a lot because your recent work is really dope, nice to hear the evolution.

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[J-Hershey]

I def see the progression you have made. You pretty much know all the flows in the track. Ultimately I feel like you don't need to revisit the track unless you want to tell the story better that is completely up to you. Def like the story telling and the melancholy melody of the track.


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