Well, You have a lot work to do bro.
Just one instrument in this beat it's not enough.
Try to add some chords or search and watch youtube tutorials about it. After it your beats will be better.
The beat is too disjointed and all over the place. There are clear mixing issues, and there are points towards the middle section of the beat where the instrumental just gives up for no apparent reason. You've got some good ideas here, just needs better execution.