Hi rag,
Basically I think your beat is cool, in terms of production and mixing you did a good job and it sounds cool to me, I also liked the FX and transitions, cool choice of samples.
What I would change is the kick drum, in my opinion it is decaying too quickly, and I would use here more 808 type of sound with bigger release and add more pitch bends (even to two octaves). You can also condider giving some movement to the main guitar theme, I think it is a little bit repetitive and maybe adding some FX for a while can attract more attention.
If you'd like to check my beats, please refer to the signature, I will be happy to get to know what do you think about them.
