Hi, here my thoughts on your beat:
Mixing - has depth and movement, the kick hits really hard (like from 0:14), I would think about the kick&bass - there are some moments in which both of them sound too distorted (1:21) for me, also the second hi-hat part (not this one with pitch movements) sounds a little bit robotic (from 1:42), so I would add some groove here
Arrangement - is interesting, there are some changes like in 0:23 when you switched off the drums, I would think about making the chorus stand out more, for example by adding some sounds related to the fight (hits, screams etc.)
I would appreciate if you could check my beats and let me know what do you think about them, please check my signature for that.