Damn, this is pretty cool. Nice experimental sound, but still hits nicely and has a nice rhythm for a rapper. Really like the samples used and the different textures. I agree that the drums could maybe change a bit for certain sections, but not a huge deal.
definitely got that flying lotus feel to it, the kick being just slightly off but on enough for it bang you nailed. the samples and you used are nice and the vocal chops are tight. i like this man great work, any feedback on this would be good [F4F] Lil skies x Juice WRLD type beat - Rap instrumental
The first thing I noticed, same as Spdy above me, is that the drums sound just slightly off beat. In boom bap its good move the drums a bit to humanize them but it's a bit much. I was counting the beats in my head and they're like a few milliseconds early. But the one shot drums you used, the sounds, are great though.
I would've liked to have heard a bit more variation, like a drop, a snare roll, or scratches but that's totally optional. Great job!