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AlexCapone

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Hey FutureProducers fam, I make beats but my main grind is rapping. I've been putting out music for about 2 years now and have have a humble following. That being said, I'd love some real feedback from people who can speak about music on an intellectual level. You can check out some of my music at Alex Capone - YouTube and I will post a couple of my more recent songs below as well:





Also, if you're going to watch two second of my videos and leave some generic half-assed critique, I won't even bother giving you feedback. I'm perfectly willing to give you an in-depth feedback if you will do the same for me. Cheers!
 
Cool productions, the raps match the vibe of the beats too. The tracks are cool production-wise but the mix could use some work IMO.

Try to thicken up the drums for example, that one goes for both tracks you posted.

I can also clearly hear the reflections of the room the vocals were recorded in on the first track, you could treat your recording room for that with a small budget tho.

So overall the tracks are cool but the engineering and recording could be a bit better, that would really boost the sound of your tracks.

Keep up the good work!
 
Thanks very much for the feedback. That's exactly what I was going for as you brought up some points no one ever told me before. Do you mind if I add you so I can get a few opinions on the engineering side of things in the future?
 
Solid beat and I like how you ride the beat and your voice is good. The beat could have a little bit more variation besides those samples that are looped and I would also like to hear a harder kick and some drum fills. Also, the songs kind of seems like one long freestyle without a clear topic and no chorus. It's def still a hard track, I just keep wanting to hear one different musical section to just keep the listener completely engaged for the whole 2 minutes.

Check me out at: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...th-etc/apollo-archangels-track-f4fa-480816/5/
 
Just to clarify, I didn't make any of these beats, and I'm looking for feedback more on the side of technical rap mechanics.
 
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AlexCapone said:
Just to clarify, I didn't make any of these beats, and I'm looking for feedback more on the side of technical rap mechanics.
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You listen to Big K.R.I.T? I kind of hear him in your voice/flow. ESPECIALLY in the 1st song, where you from? (Just cause I think I hear a southern-esque accent.)

The raspy voice thing you do in your songs is pretty cool to say the least, you definitely have a good grasp of tempo and you ride both beats very well.

The only technical rap critique that I only saw from those first 2, is towards the end of your second song where you started to speed up a little bit towards the hook (I'm assuming that's what it was, "logical that they would hate on me.")

But you got a good voice, these songs are top notch, I'm commenting on your video (check out/suscribe my channel sometimes)

Feedback mad appreciated, maybe you can rock over one of the beats: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...fferings-vol-2-*will-return-feedback*-482035/
 
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I really like your rapping, maybe the second song is more interesting, more variations and melody on the flow. (damn that beat could have been dope).

Not here to judge the engineering, more work could be done but I think you know it, and it's not that bad for the moment particularly on the first song.

Definitely really nice, keep up the good work ;)

if you like my beats don't hesitate to make me know and have fun with it https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-dirty-south-etc/new-beat-f4f-boombap-482034/
 
Thanks for the feedback! While I do listen to Big K.R.I.T., I'm ashamed to say I don't as often as I'd like too, because he's a super dope rapper. I'm from the Midwest, born and raised, but some of my family did come from the South. I'll be returning feedback momentarily!
 
AlexCapone said:
Thanks for the feedback! While I do listen to Big K.R.I.T., I'm ashamed to say I don't as often as I'd like too, because he's a super dope rapper. I'm from the Midwest, born and raised, but some of my family did come from the South. I'll be returning feedback momentarily!
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Man, he bout to release his 2nd album bruh, better peep it when he releases it.

But ah, that explains it. And thanks for the feedback man.
 
The energy in your vocals are fitting for the beats you spit on. The second track was far more my flavor though with that floaty electric piano. The beat is really chill and I like what you have to say. Keep it up brother.

Let me know what you think of my shit: Colours (Clams Casino feel) Feed for Feed!!

Interested in Collaborating? I would love to get someone to rap over my beats. Let me know. Peace!
 
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