F4F new producer tryna rap

[LeftFieldBeats]

Sup y'all been producing for a bit but i really want to write my own songs and perform as well. LMK what you guys think of this. Corny? idk tryna find my voice. Also i cannot sing worth shit haha I actually want to get a singer for the chorus. Any and all criticism is welcomed. No sugarcoated!

 

[Andrelo]

I like the rhythm, the sounds and instruments sound really dope... then only thing I think is that the snare should be different, it should fit in and match the sound of the kick, I like your lyrics and the flow!! great work,

 

[OGBama]

First step is to find some singers who are as passionate about singing as you hope to be with rapping.