[F4F] Melodic Ty Dolla $ign x Bryson Tiller Type Beat

I like this kind of visual art, you done by yourself? With which program by the way? Nice beat, have a good energy surrounding it. Sounds to me a love music type or rapping bout life chill moments. Closed hat plays fine, cool instrumental elements chose. Nice job, mix sounds balanced on my headset. Could you check any track on my soundcloud please?
 
really like this one! the main melody and the chords are a really good fit... you created a nice atmosphere with this bells and the bass fits into the picutre as well
really nothing much to do better... the only thing (but that just a personal thing) is this 'Hi'-Vox I would use it maybe just every 8th bar or less really like when the space between the vox is so big that its kinda less predictable if you kno what I mean... because otherwise vox can really dominate a beat a lil too much in my opinion... but thats not such a big deal for your beat and like I said just a real personal opinion

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ay-picasso-type-beat-f4f-529025/#post50021520
 
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Not bad man. I like your melodies and most of your sounds. Cool, laid back vibe... If I was to criticize anything it would be the composition and the mix. Your low end is pretty muddy and your kick could pop a little more. Cutting some of the low end from your piano and raising the octave of your bass might help (or possibly using a different bass patch). In terms of the composition I think the beat would be stronger if the verse and hook were more well defined. As it stands it's kind've hard to tell where the verse ends and where the hook begins and vice versa. Overall good beat but with a little polish could be great (in my opinion).

My thread -

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...c/motion-her-ocean-new-smooth-hip-hop-529248/
 
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