I appreciate your feedback . First of all you need a solid quality microphone. Record your voice, or voice of your friend idk and put it into your DAW. Add some distortion, delay, reverb and that is pretty much it.
Mmm...dig the vibe on this one. Dig the swing on the drums. I'd add a little more reverb to the piano chords (to set 'em further back in the mix/give 'em a little more space). Ooooo!! Love when that bass comes in...love the way it sits in the mix. All-in-all, not bad man...I could myself doin' somethin' to this.
When you get a chance, give me a listen; lemme know what you think.