F4F Emotional Song "Hold On" + me attempting to sing

[NinjaBeats]

Hey guys back with another single. Produced, rapped, mixed, mastered by me. Let me know what you guys think

 

[kozibeats]

Hello
Beat is simple and poor for me, maybe that was your intention for very sad and emotional, so ok
I like the kick sound and the soft clapping, really cool.
I'm not specialized in mixing vocals, but I think it's a bit too much reverb.

Please leave feedback in my topic, my new beat
Kozibeats - Spray [Feed for Feed]

 

[NinjaBeats]

Thanks man, yea I kinda went crazy with the reverb, which was my intention but I'm still learning to back off FX. Yea I wanted the beat to be dissonant and empty, I admit its not a club banger haha. I'll check your beat, props

 

[Rapper Quote]

Salute for doing it all yourself. The kick is dope, the keys need some work, maybe add some more lo end. Vocal mix is good, flow decent. Hook is a little to loud. Overall good work fam, keep grinding. Check me out here
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...uth-etc/jay-cruz-goalsaf-553956/#post50117092

 

[NinjaBeats]

Thanks man yea I cut back on the HPF on the keys, I originally did it to make it sound airy but I guess it made the whole track too thin. Props. Also tried lowering the hook vol. Gonna check your track thanks