Experimental Hip Hop 100%F4F

[Menthol Slim]

been rapping and producing hip hop for 6 weeks. i know i'm quite new to it so i decided to just go with my own style and i think i am coming onto my own now. please critique to shit as i am still looking for a balance between the weirdness i want to push and what others would enjoy.

Thanks in advance for your time feedback will be returned in a reasonable time.

 

[iam2d]

its dope just sounds like your reading the rhymes you know what I mean? try memorizing it

 

[Menthol Slim]

its dope just sounds like your reading the rhymes you know what I mean? try memorizing it

I feel you, i did memorize it just my flow is iffy as i only been writing and performing my own rap for 6 weeks.

 

[barlow617]

Do you go on r/makinghiphop? Haha I feel like I've seen your name before.

This track is dope dude. I love the dark vibe you got going. It's not really my style but I like it. I agree with iam2d that your flow needs a little work but it's still really good.

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ust-made-called-blank-check-out-[f4f]-448583/

 

[Menthol Slim]

Do you go on r/makinghiphop? Haha I feel like I've seen your name before.

This track is dope dude. I love the dark vibe you got going. It's not really my style but I like it. I agree with iam2d that your flow needs a little work but it's still really good.

https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/production-techniques/showcase-your-music-give-receive-feedback/%5Bf4f%5D-beat-i-just-made-called-blank-check-out-%5Bf4f%5D-448583/

Yes i do use r/makinghiphop

 

[DudeGotBeats]

This is dope man, just needs a better mix that's all; I love the weirdness to it though, very creative. Keep it up.

 

[Menthol Slim]

This is dope man, just needs a better mix that's all; I love the weirdness to it though, very creative. Keep it up.

thanks, anything in the mix that would need to be fixed up specifically? or just over all tweaks until its good.