Elemental - Medicine - Produced By Da Headcutta - f4f

Beat was fine on the first track. Only thing I can say that might improve on the rhyme is just to hit some words harder for a bit more of an accent. The rhythm/flow is actually nice and I would have liked to hear it emphasized/exaggerated a little bit. That's just my take, but on a beat like this with such hard hits, I think that's what we expect to hear.
Nice bars though sir. If you get a chance check out my latest. Cheers.

 
Beat was fine on the first track. Only thing I can say that might improve on the rhyme is just to hit some words harder for a bit more of an accent. The rhythm/flow is actually nice and I would have liked to hear it emphasized/exaggerated a little bit. That's just my take, but on a beat like this with such hard hits, I think that's what we expect to hear.
Nice bars though sir.

/\ Yeah. Beat is hard...reminds of some mid-90's/early-00's Dipset. lol Dig the lyrics too. I think if you can get the vocals to stand out a little more (sounds like they might be compressed....shorter attack time maybe?), you're golden. :cool:

Here's one of mine: "My Houze"

Let me know what you think when you get a chance! :cool:
 
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