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    Last edited by HEADCUTTA; 08-20-2019 at 01:03 PM.

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    I didn't expect the intro to drop like that, dope! I think you definitely have a unique sound. The only thing I would say is that I feel like the melody could be a bit repetitive at times but I'm sure if it had lyrics on it, it would sound straight. Overall, really liked it though. Nice job bro

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    Piano sample is fire(like most of your samples are tbh). Good drum selection but I wasn't feeling the kick drum pattern on this one. And I agree with dude above me, re: repitition. Consider adding a countermelody mid-way thru the verses, use some drops to a a bit of variety for an artist/songwriter.

    Overall this is tight brother!

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    Thanks man i got you

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    One thing which I don't like - sound of kick.
    Piano is great, I like it.


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    This beat is hella soulful, I don't really have anything to say except for great job man.

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    Really cool. I really like the sample. The base is also very nice. Would like a bit more low end in the kick. I don't think the repetitiveness is a problem if this is a beat to rhyme over. Some small variations during the verses could be nice but not too much. Keep up the good work!

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    Thanks I got you sir

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    On top of the things the folks above me pointed out. I would probably add a clap on top of the snare, and emphasise the bass line a bit more. But otherwise, pretty darn good chill beat, I could definitly bop to this hehe =P

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    Thanks for the feed folks hope you all had a good labor day

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