The strongest part of the song is the hooks for sure. Your verses are kinda meh wasn't really a big fan of your flows on them. It was the way you were saying the words that kinda wasn't good in my opinion. But the beat was perfect, and when listening to the hook I got a heavy drake feel from it especially the masterful way you used autotune in there.
The beat was really good, but the only thing I can say you need to work on is your diction. It's really hard to understand what you're saying sometimes. The chorus was actually really good though and I found myself enjoying that a lot. I would also chill on the reverb and auto-tune a bit. Also maybe leave out the doubling of the voice, it just comes off a bit much. Love that chorus just would be so much better with a little less of that reverb and auto-tune. You got a good thing going though buddy, love it!
Haha keepin it simple works too thanks for the feedback I'll take that.can i screw this down?
sounds like some travis scott shit.
few questions :
1. Do you make your own beats?
2. If so do you mix
3. If not are you apart of the process?
that second verse is tight as hell man, i like this shit if you wanna collab i might have some shit that you might like