dark hip hop beat [F4F]

[motaboys]

Hey, check out my beat at noperhapsnot by motaboys | Free Listening on SoundCloud, would be extremely grateful for some comments and support (post your music for feedback),

Thank you!

 

[AugustusTheGreat]

The melody is pretty cool and active. I do think I would add a more interesting sounding bass/bassline in there if you are going for a hip hop beat though. It feels like it doesn't establish a really strong driving groove if you know what I mean. Probably biggest thing to work on for a beat like this. Really unique sound and cool melody though.

My beat.
[F4F] Get Away (Returning All Feedback)

 

[motaboys]

Thanks for the in depth feedback. I really like your beat especially your use of the opera voices at the beginning and the main leading sounds. My only comment would be to spice up the drums a little as although they do a good job at driving the beat, they get a little repetitive without much variation. Also the background noises are really cool.

 

[Chill Rap Beats]

dope real smooth