Critique some of my best work

[berserproductions]

First off, I mostly make trap instrumentals, hip-hop instrumentals, downtempo lo-fi instrumentals, and oldschool rap instrumentals that all contain oriental instruments or an oriental feel. The following tracks are a pretty good indicator of where I'm at, musically, so far. I've been producing for about 9 months now and these are some my latest completed works. Let me know what you guys think. I'm always looking for feedback, collaborators, and listeners.

full tracks:
Oceanfront View by Vavlt Goed | Free Listening on SoundCloud
Consider Death (Interlude) by Vavlt Goed | Free Listening on SoundCloud
Caves with Little Bald Men in Them by Vavlt Goed | Free Listening on SoundCloud
Wavy (prod. Vavlt Goed) by Vavlt Goed | Free Listening on SoundCloud
A Street Vender Named Jade (prod. Vavlt Goed) by Vavlt Goed | Free Listening on SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/vavltgod/yume
https://soundcloud.com/vavltgod/osaka-charges-prod-vavlt-god

mix and mastering works:
https://soundcloud.com/catlum/little-things
https://soundcloud.com/catlum/get-affection

I know it's a lot but I would appreciate any and all feedback on any of them. Listen to one, Listen to them all, I don't mind. I would like some help in seeing what I did right and what I did wrong. Many thanks, in advance!

 

[HailCaesar]

I listened to Oceanfront View & Wavy Ill leave feedback for both.

Oceanfront View: Nice beat very chill the sound selection is really good & its add to the chill vibes. The beat deffo suits its name imo the beat is real nice I couldn't think anything I would change the mix sounds clean there was enough variation to keep listeners interested nice work on this beat.

Wavy: Another nice chill beat this one is a lil too short so I can't say much but what I would say is the low end needs some tweaking the kick and 808 could use a lil more energy and you could add some transitions in to let listeners know when the beat is changing or entering a new section.

Check out my latest.
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...rnative-hip-hop-trap-f4f-549034/#post50100856