THAT SYNTH! It's fuckin creamy... Reminds me of Phil Collins...
Drum pattern is good, but not a fan of the snare/clap- I'm hearing like a low body snare with a rim shot laid on top of it.
I think you could sidechain (Multiband comp) your 808 to the main synth harmony so that it comes through- it's pretty buried as it is now. You might could eq carve the synth to fit the 808 frequencies into the track better as well...
Not bad for your first drill beat. I've only made 1 drill beat myself so I can't call myself an expert. A couple things I did notice tho is that your 808 and snare should cut through the mix a lot more than they do now. It's a good beat, I would just focus on the mix (and it wouldn't hurt to speed it up a couple BPMs either). Hope that helps