CÆ - Manifest (Prod. Josh Jorge) - Feedback for Feedback

[cheeezusrice]

Awhile back I posted an older version of this and took some of the criticism into consideration. Let me know what you think of this in its current state.

Any criticism is welcome. I'll return all feedback once I get the chance.

 

[CBG]

I like that villain beat impression created. The vocals seens fine to me, and the pitch combine it with the proposal musical style. Nice work
If you wish to look some other beat types, upload every tuesday two new beats on the soundcloud - https://soundcloud.com/cbg-131194

 

[J.GIN]

The beat and the song structure are crazy af! Your flow reminds of Sweatshirt at times, not bad but i'd try to make it stand out a bit more. Keep it up doe!
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...acey-beat-hyperbolic-time-chamber-f4f-519216/

 

[Flynn De$homme$]

Blind was right. Kinda do sound like sweatshirt! I fucking with the track though man.
Pretty dope flow.

I'd appreciate if you clicked play

 

[DAHTrump]

Pretty dope! I Like what you did with the vocals and you manipulated them. Sounds of the instruments are cool too

Let me know what you think of this. Comment on soundcloud preferred:
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-featuring-james-brown-siri-f4f-100-a-519386/

 

[Eff V]

Damn this is one of the coolest feels I've gotten from a beat in a while. Such a nice soundscape, so rare to find nowadays. My only complaint is there sounds like a couple errant frequencies in the vocals that clash with the background. Other than that tho, sick sick stuff.