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    Backroads - YJ Vasco (produced by Vasco) f4f

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    Let me know what yall think



    produced the track on my own...off "California Diaries Vol. 1"

    f4f as always, thanks in advance, appreciate ur time

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    the beat is dope. the vocals are mixed a little bright to me..i think the hook could be delivered completely different to flow better. i like where you were goin with it but it could be way better with what you had written but i do like your verses you put on it.

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    for sure, thanks for checking me out....def keep that in mind when mixing

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    Good shit. I dig the production sounds well mixed, the flows are innovative at times an basic at others but that's not a bad thing at all.
    Keep on grindin my man.

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    This is nice, although I think the vocals could be mixed a bit better, there seems to be a lot more than necessary going on within the high frequencies, it does add clarity but they become too much for my ears over time. The beat is nice too, but I feel as if the lows get a bit muddy at times, good work though! Keep it up

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    thanks, yall appreciate the time u guys took to listen to my track

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    dope work, i don't think the vocals are a problem really when it comes to the mix. i think your echo is alil much. but with the mix, it seems good, its on top of the beat. but im using headphones, so on monitors it may be different? but good work anyway man.

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    like previous posters have said the vocals are mixed a bit too bright, and i feel in some instances you "fall on top of your words" i think your flow is good but sometimes it sounds too stuck together if it makes sense. but good job man

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    @Yungspazz thanks man...ill look into the echo, maybe change it up or something

    @arvindsg for sure, i think i get what ur saying

    sorry for the delayed response, bout to go return feed

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    beat is nice but the sounds could be better selected. the chorus sounds too whiny to me, your flow works but could be harder and more pronounced to better fit the beat. check me out unique trap banger f4f (criticise my mix harshly)

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