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therealage

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Hey guys. Its my birthday today so I decided to release a new song I did with a fellow artist named ThatKidJhii. I am on the first 2 verses and on the production of the track. ThatKidJhii spits the 3rd verse.

Let us know what you guys think and I will return the favor! Much love!

 
nearly flawless work... this is dope. no criticisms production wise but just to have something to say constructively- a lot of the flows in this are very reminiscent of other people - i'd like to hear you do more unique and weird flows and delivery, even if they don't work perfectly.

thanks for the feedback on my track man. happy belated b day
keep it up.
 
Wow, this is really clean man. Really professional sounding. The beat leaves a lot of room for vocals and is well mixed. The vocals are mixed really well and sound great with the beat. You have a great natural rap voice. That little singing hook is really dope too. The other guy was alright, but you were definitely the best part. Nice job.

You can listen to my beat here. https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-unique-guitar-meursault-525124/#post50005145


Thanks bro! Feedback returned!
 
The recording itself is good, and it sounds like you are very confident and it shines through. Though, I think you should do some songs more deep, you know like poetry. Try experimenting a little with that. Otherwise good work.

Feedback returned? https://www.futureproducers.com/for...south-etc/just-clauz-mic-rider-danish-525175/

If you check out the other tracks on my SC you'll find that I have deep songs. I like to mix it up. I don't stick with just one vibe. Thanks for checking it out! Feedback has been returned!
 
Nice smooth atmosphere from the start. I like the way this cool atmosphere is mixed with an agressive trap beat. The mixing is cool, especially the voice recording. It sounds very clean, really professional sound. You also have a good punch on your drum pattern. The chorus is pretty catchy too. It's all good for me. Very good job bro! ;)

Check my beat:
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...h-etc/sandstorm-cloud-trap-beat-f-4-f-525184/

glad you liked it! feedback has been returned!
 
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