^^^ Yea if you could make the low end sound more full, it would really hit. There is a strange reverb ambience in the background that I think is competing with your low end. Add possibly some sin sub frequency(808) under the kick in different places for added variation and let this bang! but Eqing your low end to avoid that bass frequency will definitely help. Sounds dope other than that, clean melodies and a vibin beat, good work dude!