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    Alone - JVSMINE | new chill song* [F4F]

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    Here's a new song I just made called Alone! Let me know what you guys think, feedback is always appreciated and I'll make sure to return the favor. If you're liking what I'm doing, feel free to follow me on soundcloud and I'll follow back as well.


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    This is chill asf, love the beat. Reminds me of something that drake wouldve gone on. Vocals are pretty decent imo, not the best but you can def hold a melody and it doesnt sound bad. Good job

    Could I get some feedback on this?
    https://soundcloud.com/distortedwonder/nightspot

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    Really feeling this. Definitely has that Drake/PND type feel to the beat and you surf on the beat well. Mix sounds crispy clean too.

    Any feedback on this track would be dope: https://soundcloud.com/slank/surplus...-prod-by-talon

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    Quote Originally Posted by DistortedWonder View Post
    This is chill asf, love the beat. Reminds me of something that drake wouldve gone on. Vocals are pretty decent imo, not the best but you can def hold a melody and it doesnt sound bad. Good job

    Could I get some feedback on this?
    https://soundcloud.com/distortedwonder/nightspot
    Hey thanks for taking the time to check out my song! I'm glad you enjoyed the beat and thanks for your honesty about the vocals. I'm definitely always looking to improve, especially since I'm definitely not a singer lol. Thanks again for checking it out and leaving feedback, I really appreciate it.

    I checked out your song "nightspot". Honestly not the type of music I generally like but it's really unique, and I love different. I love the sounds you're making and the feel of the song is really cool, definitely a trippy song. Keep up the great work

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    Quote Originally Posted by TalonBeatz View Post
    Really feeling this. Definitely has that Drake/PND type feel to the beat and you surf on the beat well. Mix sounds crispy clean too.

    Any feedback on this track would be dope: https://soundcloud.com/slank/surplus...-prod-by-talon
    Thanks for checking it out, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I've been working on my mix skills so I really appreciate the feedback on the mix. I checked out your song "surplus value", the vocals sound very clean and i like the beat a lot (i'm a sucker for saxophone lol) but yea great beat, i was vibing with it. Didn't like the vocals over top, not into that flow personally but its a clean production. Keep making that heat🔥

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    Smooth sir something to relax on after a hard days work

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    Quote Originally Posted by HEADCUTTA View Post
    Smooth sir something to relax on after a hard days work
    I'm a girl lol but thanks for taking the time to check out the song, appreciate it!

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    Very nicely produced and mixed. Great singing voice as well. Just gave you a follow. Check out my beat tape its only 5 minutes.


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    i really dig the vibe of this song, it sounds proper faded and relaxing. Your voice is nice too, and it fits this type of beat very vell. nice work!
    here is my beat

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    I definitely like those 808s in the beat. Very chill sound like everyone else said.

    Your vocals sound pretty good and I like the effects. Smooth track. Nothing sounds too out of place. Nice work!

    Here is my beat. The Wild by Meursault Beats

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