the melodies`are really good man, your sound selection is solid for all the drums aswell. i think the perc and hat are panned to far the left imo but for only being a month experimenting is key. you got potential if this is what your making after a month fr.
I agree with SPDY the melodies and sound selection are on point and the drums/patterns are good but I agree with the hats and percs being too far panned. the low end could use some more energy and punch also I'm currently listening on earphones so thats probs why but this beat does sound dope.
it's nice but the key melody is planned too much to the right. If you want that stereo feel then it'd be best to layer another meldy over that one. Needs more variation aswell