*R&B Beat* Convenient *F4F 100%*

Ace2CWB

Ace2CWB

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Made this one back in April, some stuff i need to work on for this one, no mixing or mastering yet.



The better your review is, the more inclined i am to give YOU an in depth review... Comment on the mix, mastering, panning, sound choice, arrangement, whole 9 yards... [FONT=&quot]F4F Guaranteed[/FONT]
 
wow man this is real good :) piano is beautifull :D. like your tuned percussions too. good job on the panning percussions really helps with the vibe :). maybe add some more melody after a while for like the hook or the verse so we can tell them apart easier? maybe a flute/piano/strings/guitars or something rnbish. just something little on the high notes maybe? :)

you could add a bassline too but to me this sounds very good so I dont think you need a bassline, it might just mess it up. ^^

solid beat tho man :) feels like its already done with mixing and mastering and is ready to have vocals on it.

apprichiate if u could return feedback https://www.futureproducers.com/for...elo-remix-feed4feed-100%-415744/#post49461040
 
this a dope track bro. the drums sound really good. the snare you used is very fitting nice reverb tail on it. I like the piano alot and the video game sounding motif was dope as hell too. this really is a great track
 
Very chill man, loving it. The piano melody is beautiful and is very calming. The drums are also very good and they match, one thing that I would change is the hats, lower the volume and give its own melody, so it won't be in equal consistency.

The background synths had a good delay on it, maybe just make it have a bit stonger of a reverb (maybe a longer decay, lower the dryness just a bit).

It also is a bit repetitive, but that is the style I suppose, great job overall, you make really good beats.

Please check out my new track/remix, I'd greatly appreciate some constructive criticism.

https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/production-techniques/showcase-your-music-give-receive-feedback/new-electro-remix-f4f-100%25-guaranteed-415460/

Thanks. :)
 
i like where this track is heading. the paino melody is very soothing. im sure this would be hot once your done. maybe add some strings for sure.
 
gotta add more to it in order to keep it flowing for a singer. Maybe throw some string/synth pad chords into it for the hook, a lead maybe in the verses along with a bass line melody. Finally add a bridge and send it out to a songwriter and you'll be golden. It's a great start, could certainly work for a single for a more contemporary R&B/Neo-soul artist (examples: Heather Headley or Gordon Chambers). You can check my thread here:
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...i-go-get-rock-remix-feedback-returned-415456/
 
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