First try at Funky jazz by Sanna Hartfield.

[dARTfader]

Hi people,

I've made some jazz today for the first time in my life as producer. The song is based on the vocal track "captain Elliot" by Sanna Hartfield. Hope you like it. Critical comments are welcome. I will give feedback in return if you ask for it

Here is the track....

 

[MrMcDowell]

I can hear where you are trying to go with this track, good vision on that. I would say maybe change your drum selections and it could help bring some more energy to the beat. Although I love the jazz elements they sound a little plastic or comupter simulated, ya know? At any rate, I dig the beat fam, keep up the good work. Heres my beat, can you return the feed please: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...p-trap-dirty-south-etc/love-remix-f4f-512605/

 

[Eddie Edwaffle]

I like the track for what it is. Everything goes together well enough. However, I wouldn't call it a jazz beat at all, you might want to change up the drum pattern if you really want to make a jazz instrumental. It's a good EDM Trap track, but not too jazzy. It would be interesting if you could make those jazz drums and make it drop into what you have now. Listen to Louis Armstrong or Frank Sinatra to get some inspiration. But it's a good track
If you wanna leave some feedback, here's my track https://edwaffle.bandcamp.com/track/melostalgia