TheStudentAlejandro
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tell me what you like, dislike, whats missing, what stands out....peace
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Vocals are clear and nice
for music, it could be more than just drums and 4 chords, i think. bring more instruments in
also i would work on arrangement, a track is too short, only 1 min. even if you have not much of lyrics, make an interessting intro and bridge so you get maybe to bit more than 2 min
keep on
for music, it could be more than just drums and 4 chords, i think. bring more instruments in
also i would work on arrangement, a track is too short, only 1 min. even if you have not much of lyrics, make an interessting intro and bridge so you get maybe to bit more than 2 min
keep on
klzbeats13
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Vocals are clear and nice
for music, it could be more than just drums and 4 chords, i think. bring more instruments in
also i would work on arrangement, a track is too short, only 1 min. even if you have not much of lyrics, make an interessting intro and bridge so you get maybe to bit more than 2 min
keep on
Not trying to be lazy, but he basically wrote everything that I was going to say. You need the track to be longer. You need more variation in the drums and chords. Try adding some hi hats, bells, other percussion to the mix. I really love the melody though, and the hook. Very catchy so far. Keep adding some lyrics and production into the mix and you should be good!
Here's my thread. Let me know what you think!