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    Sup. everybody just posted a new track off ongoing LP I'm working on.
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    Chill track. I assume the guitar was played? It sound a little too di, maybe try an amp simulator if you have a plug in for that. Also the drums kinda threw me off with the snare being on 1 & 3 instead of 2 & 4. Maybe let the beat ride out the end a bit, it kinda ends too sudden, unless thats what you were going for. As far as the vocals, they cut through nice, I usually dont like singy type stuff, but it works nice for this track. Maybe turn the overdubs down a bit also. Other than that, sounds nice man.

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    Definitely unique. The lyrics are sick. Some parts of the vocals seem a little jumbled and and hard to comprehend, for example at :41 the vocal sounds like you just shoved syllables in a place where they couldn't fit. Second verse sounded a little more clean. Just clean up the flow a little bit and you got it. Nice work tho.
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    Not my style of music but it's still on point my man, mixing is good and you should definitely let the beat ride out at some points instead of filling the entire song with lyrics but that's just my opinion, keep it up.

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    This is pretty good, guitar is dope, lyrics are good, vocals sound pretty good but hard to comprehend at times. Overall, good job fam keep going.

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    sup man over all it need some work. the vocals could be cleaner and the beat gets repetitive.
    has a chill feeling to it. def has some potential keep adding small details to make it live. over all good work man

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    The beats gets a little too repetitive. And it might just be me, but that snare is really throwing me off. Switch that out for one with less decay, little reverb.

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    Thx for the feed I re uploaded with some of the changes you guys suggested

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    wow I'm pretty impressed... only the beat could be a bit more aggressive for me but that's a matter of what you like

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    The flows really ruined this beat for me.
    I like the simple guitar riff though think it could be processed a bit better.
    The kick/snare works. Hats could use some work.
    Beat is really simple overall and needs more aggressiveness and change ups.
    Just feels like it loops for me.
    Keep it up and sorry for the delay on the feedback.

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