NEW MUSIC - The 49ers - One More Chance (Produced by GavByrne187)

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- The rhode melody is nice
- the drums need alot of work -- its way too behind in the mix -- i say turn it up and lower the rhodes in the mix
- Cool chill vibe for real
- Rapper is cool -- he needs a better mix and lacks mic presence in my opinion
- i like the idea of having the singer on the hook -- i think the hook was good

Great vision but the mix of the overall track can be alot better!

Please return the favour:

Zack Knight - "Snap" (Produced by Benny Liang & Zack Knight) (F4F)

Thanks!
 
https://soundcloud.com/byrneproducer/one-more-chance-ft-bodhilynn

Any feedback would be welcomed and returned as usual :)
The rhodes chords + breaks drum kinda beat is alright- I like the chord progression and it fits with the song- but its real basic. Like I feel like you could take the chords and translate them across maybe some strings or a basic synth patch- layer it up so it sounds big, you know? Drums need a lot of work too- even if you wanna keep em simple I could see a lot of work being done to this just by punching up the kick and adding some sort of unique snare/clap/whatever. Maybe some stops and edits and some fills- nothing too complex, just something to make it stand out from other beats with a similar vibe.

Your vocals are alright, I don't know what to say about their recording but I can say that they sound really tense and uncomfortable sometimes. Like they got the flow most of the time but theres some issues where they do more complex rhythms and it just don't sound as fluid as it could. I'm not an emcee tho so Idk what you'd do to fix it. But good ideas all over you just need to refine some ish. Keep pushing

Here's mine. Appreciate you returning the favor;
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ed-out-trap-kinda-beat-skubi-helpless-473392/
 
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